DIF-M-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-MARS-V1.0 Catalog ======= o In the dataset.cat file description, please add full citations to the Calibration papers (i.e., as footnotes in the text – in addition to the REFERENCE objects that also exist). o In dataset.cat. the CITATION_DESC year must be '2014' since this is when the data were reviewed and released to the public. o In dataset.cat, the DESCRIPTION is lacking the usual summary of why the data were taken in the first place. A sentence or two should be added to address this. o In dataset.cat, the DESCRIPTION refers to this version “correcting” an earlier version, but there is no earlier version. The wording of the entire section needs to be changed to align with the actual circumstances (the original submission of these data was rejected at review because of the problem cited, and that improvements made to later versions of data sets have also been applied to this initial archive version). o In the dataset.cat file, the phrase “across the Mars” should be changed to “across Mars” everywhere it occurs. Documents ========= o Ensure these data sets have the latest versions of these document files: day_of_year_calendar.lbl epoxi_cal_pipeline_summ.lbl epoxi_sis.lbl instruments_hampton.lbl pdsdd_epoxi.lbl quaternion_desc.lbl o In epoxi_sis.pdf: - This document says labels for HRIV, MRI, and ITS level 3/4 data, PDS keyword PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT contain FLAT_PRO= FLATCONS= FLATTEMP= CALWINDW= CALWINPY= but the sample labels in the SIS's 4.4.4.1 and 4.4.4.2 do not. - p. 27: "DIF-L-HRII-3_4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" should have a / not a _ i.e. "DIF-L-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" - epoxy_sis.pdf pages 47-9 the figures are misaligned with the text. This needs to be corrected in every copy of the document in all data sets. o There are summary files with names like “hriv_3_4_epoxi_garrad.pdf”. In at least some of these labels in some data sets, the Julian Date field is described as being in the form “YYYYMMDD”. This needs to be fixed if it applies to this data set. o In places that describe the file naming convention, there needs to be a clear indication of which time (beginning, middle, end) is used for creating the file name. o Need additional description of the spectral scanning mode. In this case, perhaps it should be added to document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf, with a brief summary in dataset.cat. The strategy involved is particularly important for this dataset. o AAREADME.TXT mentions a non-existent EXTRAS/ directory. o AAREADME.TXT should point users to the essential, point-of-entry type documentation. o If possible, please add an explanation for the changing position of Mars within the slit (if short, it can go in the dataset.cat DESCRIPTION). o It was not obvious where the 8-file observing sequence came from. Please add a brief explanation in a high-visibility area. o In document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf, the opening paragraph misstates the wavelength range of the HRII instrument. o Consider adding a browse directory if resources allow. DATA/ ===== o The maximum value in the file hi09112017_10000021_001_rr.fit did not match the MAXIMUM value stated in the PDS label, but this may be related to a local EPOXI:MAXIMUM keyword. This needs to be investigated and possibly explained (or better defined in the EPOXI dictionary).