DIF-M-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-MARS-V1.0 Review Result: Certified. Symbol Key: o = Lien open x = Lien resolved or closed ! = Lien rejected or declined + = Comments (by SMcLaughlin unless otherwise indicated) Catalog ======= ! In the dataset.cat file description, please add full citations to the Calibration papers (i.e., as footnotes in the text in addition to the REFERENCE objects that also exist). + Rejected by PI and archive lead. The correct and full citations are already in ref.cat. x In dataset.cat. the CITATION_DESC year must be '2014' since this is when the data were reviewed and released to the public. + Done. ! In dataset.cat, the DESCRIPTION is lacking the usual summary of why the data were taken in the first place. A sentence or two should be added to address this. + Declined. Both ABSTRACT_DESC and DATA_SET_DESC explicity state the data were acquired by EPOCh to characterize Mars as an analog for extrasolar planets. That was one purpose of EPOCh. Read the EPOCh overview in /document/. x In dataset.cat, the DESCRIPTION refers to this version correcting an earlier version, but there is no earlier version. The wording of the entire section needs to be changed to align with the actual circumstances (the original submission of these data was rejected at review because of the problem cited, and that improvements made to later versions of data sets have also been applied to this initial archive version). + Done. x In the dataset.cat file, the phrase "across the Mars" should be changed to "across Mars" everywhere it occurs. + Done. Affected dataset.cat and document/epoch_mars_seq_2009.lbl. Documents ========= x Ensure these data sets have the latest versions of these document files: day_of_year_calendar.lbl epoxi_cal_pipeline_summ.lbl epoxi_sis.lbl instruments_hampton.lbl pdsdd_epoxi.lbl quaternion_desc.lbl + Done. x In epoxi_sis.pdf: x This document says labels for HRIV, MRI, and ITS level 3/4 data, PDS keyword PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT contain FLAT_PRO= FLATCONS= FLATTEMP= CALWINDW= CALWINPY= but the sample labels in the SIS's 4.4.4.1 and 4.4.4.2 do not. x p. 27: "DIF-L-HRII-3_4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" should have a / not a _ i.e. "DIF-L-HRII-3/4-EPOXI-LUNAR-CALS-V1.0" x epoxy_sis.pdf pages 47-9 the figures are misaligned with the text. This needs to be corrected in every copy of the document in all data sets. + Done, except for the item about PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT. That PDS keyword will contain different processing keywords because the calibration pipeline performs different steps for the VIS HRIV, MRI, and ITS CCDs and the IR spectrometer. For example, the FITS header keywords FLAT_PRO, FLATCONS, FLATTEMP, CALWINDW, & CALWINPY only apply to IR calibration, so those values are never included in PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT. However, we noted this difference in the description of PROCESSING_HISTORY_TEXT in the SIS. For last item, had to print the Word file as a Postscript to force alignment of figure pieces with text, then distilled the Postscript to PDF/A. x There are summary files with names like hriv_3_4_epoxi_garrad.lbl. In at least some of these labels in some data sets, the Julian Date field is described as being in the form YYYYMMDD. This needs to be fixed if it applies to this data set. + Done. x In places that describe the file naming convention, there needs to be a clear indication of which time (beginning, middle, end) is used for creating the file name. + Not applicable. Mid-obs is used in the filenames and for grouping products into DOY directories, and this is already called out in the EPOXI SIS and dataset.cat files! x Need additional description of the spectral scanning mode. In this case, perhaps it should be added to document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf, with a brief summary in dataset.cat. The strategy involved is particularly important for this dataset. + Done. Improved description in document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf and dataset.cat. x AAREADME.TXT mentions a non-existent EXTRAS/ directory. + Done. Removed. x AAREADME.TXT should point users to the essential, point-of-entry type documentation. + Done. Directed reader to DATASET.CAT in CATALOG. x If possible, please add an explanation for the changing position of Mars within the slit (if short, it can go in the dataset.cat DESCRIPTION). + Done. Improved Improved description in document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf and dataset.cat. x It was not obvious where the 8-file observing sequence came from. Please add a brief explanation in a high-visibility area. + Done. Improved Improved description in document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf and dataset.cat. x In document/epoch_mars_obs.pdf, the opening paragraph misstates the wavelength range of the HRII instrument. + Done. Corrected. ! Consider adding a browse directory if resources allow. + Declined. Resources are limited, and project believes galleries adds very little benefit when viewing geometry does not vary much. DATA/ ===== x The maximum value in the file hi09112017_10000021_001_rr.fit did not match the MAXIMUM value stated in the PDS label, but this may be related to a local EPOXI:MAXIMUM keyword. This needs to be investigated and possibly explained (or better defined in the EPOXI dictionary). + Done. But this is not a problem. The "Display Images" section in dataset.cat already explain that MAXIMUM/MINIMUM values in labels exclude reference/overclock rows/cols at image edges and points reader to EPOXI SIS for more info. I did change MAXIMUM and MINIMUM to the local EPOXI:MAXIMUM and EPOXI/MINIMUM in the "Display Images" section.